how comes in some reviews you get Pros for stuff like demolishing a stable before it went into red or something, but in others you dont get pros for things that actually quite hard to do,
in some replays i cant even find a decent pro, so you get those liitle pro's, but dont think of it as pro-ness think of it more along the line these are the things you did good on. and if there where way to many cons i wont even do a pro/con list just go over there major errors and how to try and correct them.
You also need to add ways for hem to improve moose. Not just retell the game in the Summary .
Example, you said poor elf usage but you didn't tell him what was poor or how he could make it better . Good review appart from that though ( not having watched the actual game) .