Team 1 AI^BrutalArmy^(-DoMiNaToR-) - Purple, GLA Demolitions General(Top Left) HAYABUSA^BG - Cyan, USA Vanilla(Top Right) Team 2 Fo0L`(fgl) - Pink, Stealth(Bottom Right) DaGoS`(bgl) - Gold, China Tank General(Bottom Left) ____ Pink and Gold make a decent 2 vs 2 team(especially as GLA) from what I have seen while playing with then; Purple is an Expert, and Cyan is a 1 vs 1 guy, so the game should be decent no mater what the match-up. No Particularly unique Build Orders are done at the start; Purple does a full-defense of his side of the wall, using three spread tunnels, two on the hill, and one by the unsafe supply, and a demo trap in front of each direct-wall entrance(those pointed toward his base and his unsafe supply). Cyan does a poorly executed drop on Golds base at 1:26, just below, to the right, of the main supply; He loses 2 Missile Defenders to Golds Supply Trucks, most likely due to lag delaying the "X" split. That really benefited Gold, because he delayed taking his safe supply in favor of a quick second War Factory pointed toward Purples unsafe supply; He used that second War Factory to put out a Dragon Tank toward said unsafe supply, and used his first War Factory for a defensive Gatling Tank. The Dragon Tank drives past a Demo Trap and does get a flame-wall onto Purples Unsafe supplies defensive tunnel, which burns up several workers and two RPG Troopers(most likely to lag); While the flaming of the tunnel was ongoing Pink sent a Technical filled with four(4) Terrorists and a Worker up past the Dragon Tank and into the Demo Trap at 1:55; Why that was going on Cyan failed with another Missile Defender drop. Between 2:30 and 2:40 Purple and Pink kill off each others unsafe supply workers. At 3:10 Yellow flame walls Purples unsafe supply again, killing all of the workers. At 3:33 Purple failed an attempt to run over all of the workers at Pinks unsafe supply. Pink went for an early Palace, and it is completed at 3:47, and Gold started on his Propaganda Center at 3:40; So Team 2 was Tech'd up, and on superior supply income(between the two of them) than their opponents. Pink and Gold were most likely doing more communicating than Purple and Cyan. At 3:56 Pink ran over all of Purple workers at his unsafe supply(just needed at least one Humvee to stop that); Cyan reacts after Purple drops a Beacon on his unsafe supply. At 4:39 Cyan moves his army of four(4) Humvees and an Ambulance through the wall toward Pinks Unsafe supply; He destroys a Tunnel Network and a Gatling Tank($1,500), but loses two full Humvees and three(3) Scout Drones($4,700). At 5:34 Pink successfully destroyed Purples unsafe supply with a full-Terror-tech. At 6:00 Gold engages the Tunnel and it's army at Purples unsafe supply, and Cyan is planning a three(3) Chinook drop on Gold. At 6:25 Purple and Cyan both go in for the attack on Golds base while his army is destroying Purples unsafe supply; Cyan with his drop(in the same spot as his very first drop) of five(5) Humvees with an Ambulance, and Purple with what army he could muster. Cyan and Purple totally destroy Golds base, and Pink was unable to help due to his choice to go full-Rocket Buggies; Yellow goes up toward Purples main base with his untouched army. Cyan destroyed the top layer of Pinks main-supply with a Tier 2 A-10 strike(Would have destroyed it all, but a few rockets were stopped by the camouflaged Palace). At 8:30 Gold destroys the Strategy Center of Cyan's that was beside Purples main-supply, rendering all of his Humvees very weak in the lag. At 9:00 Cyan comes to help Purple with a few Humvees, but Pink also comes up from the bottom with three(3) Rocket Buggies to help Yellow. By 9:26 Golds army is destroyed, along with Cyan's, but Purple is left with no income and only $604; Pinks Rocket Buggies hit a Demo trap and that was that. Gold is promoted and goes for his Command Center at 9:30. Cyan gets his Strategy Center and S&D back up at 9:54, and Pink Beacons it for Gold. 10:00 $23,925 in Team 1's unsafe Supply Dock. At 10:20 Purple and Cyan both go full-force against Pinks defenses(Three(3) Tunnel Networks) using nine(9) Scorpion Tanks, four(4) Humvees, and two(2) Ambulances; They are 100% Successful in destroying Pinks defenses and getting into the area of his base. At 11:05 Gold destroys Cyan's Strategy Center using his Tier 3 Artillery Strike. Purple and Cyan are deterred from attacking Pinks base by an Emperor Overlord and Jarmen Kell, and go after the safe-supply instead. In the meantime Purple tries to take back his unsafe supply, but Pink has the same plans to take it, and establishes a Tunnel Network just a few feet to the left of it, while Purple builds a supply to the right of it. At 11:54 Cyan using a Tier 3 A-10 Strike to destroy Pinks main-supply and his Arms Dealer; And He and Purple move into Golds base from the safe-supply area. At 12:20 Cyan destroys the Tunnel Network Pink build by Purples unsafe-supply. At 12:57 the destruction of Golds base is total, no building remains; And at the same time Cyan dropped a Fuel-Air Bomb and Used his Spectre Gunship on Pinks base; Destroying Golds War Factory with the Bomb and Pinks Black Market with the Spectre. At 14:02 both Teams are in defense, except for Golds Lotus, who waits until 14:45 to force Cyan into selling his War Factory; By this time all of the players are on nearly no income, or funds to use, Cyan has none. Cyan uses his army of six(6) Humvees and three(3) Ambulances to attack Pinks Unsafe-supply area; He is only somewhat successful, and is forced to retreat when an Emperor Overlord and Jarmen Kell come over. At 6:12 Cyan loses his Strategy Center to another Artillery Strike, and he only has $1,910 left, so he cannot rebuild it. At 16:24 Purple finally finishes his Palace that he started a while before, but at the same time he loses his unsafe supply to a Terror-tech sent by Pink, leaving him with only $2,012, so not enough for a real Black Market. At 16:54 Cyan destroys one of Pinks two(2) Black Markets using his Tier 3 A-10 Strike. Purple goes the FAKE Black Market path(always a good choice in the situation). At 17:004 Purple places a Beacon on his unsafe supply to let Cyan know that he is stealing his funds, and at the same time Cyan sends his Humvee army into Golds base-area again, destroying the Supply Center there; At the same time he used his Spectre Gunship on Pinks other Black Market, destroying it, but missing the camouflaged one just below it. At 17:46 that Emperor Overlord(Gold) and Jarmen Kell(Pink) destroy Purples unsafe supply. At 18:24 Cyan destroys Pinks unsafe supply. At around 19:30 that nasty Emperor Overlord and Jarmen Kell combo was finally ended, but Purples Jarmen Kell. At 19:46 Gold managed to get a Dragon Tank into Cyan's base and burn away his barracks; And at 19:57 Cyan leaves, giving Purple USA, and Power, but not many funds. 20:00 At 20:20 the Dragon Tank is destroyed, but not until it destroys a Power-plant(CFR) and makes Purple sell the USA Command Center(that could have just been for the $1,000, but a free large scan is very helpful). With Power in his hands and near-complete map control, Purple dominates the field. At 22:07 Purple goes for his Command Center, and is actively attacking the safe-supply area on his way into Pinks base. Gold uses his Tier 3 Artillery Strike on Purples attacking army, but only destroys a single Quad Cannon(Would have been better used on Purples income). Purple launches a few attacks on what remains of the combined defenses of Pink and Gold(Both corners in the bottom-right base). At 26:00 Pink tries to get a Tunnel Network behind Purples unsafe supply, but Purple is sick of having Michael Bay movies being shot in that area, so he kills the worker. At 26:40 Gold displays his Iron Will, with four tier 1 hackers in a lagging game, he still has it in him to use a Dragon Tank to destroy a Tunnel Network Purple built at the safe-supply by their base. At 29:11 Gold almost dropped a load of mines on top of Purples Jarmen Kell, and Pink uses an Ambush as well, coupled with a Radar Van, but Jarmen just snipes out the Radar Van and walks away from the Rebels. 30:00 Purple is sitting pretty on eight(8) Black Markets and Power. At 30:26 Gold destroys Purples power and a single Black Market with his Artillery Strike. Pink drives two Battle Buses around looking to destroy whatever Purple has in the bottom-left base. Generals Abilities become the preferred mode for attacking. 40:00 The game really slows down and becomes campy, with only little bits of action here and there. At around 42:38 Purple finishes his first SCUD Storm, and has switched over to Battle Buses, but Pink drops a Toxin Bomb on his production. At 42:58 Pink finished a Tunnel Network behind Purples defenses, just a few inches away from the top-right supply. At 43:04 the second SCUD Storm is up for Purple. At 43:50 Pink hijacks one of Purples Dozers in that top-right base, he gets a Power-plant scaffold in his base, and then Purple retaliates against the tunnels behind his defenses, but doesn't manage to kill both the tunnels on the first attempt; He does that at 44:59. Pink gets his first SCUD Storm up at around 44:46. At 45:15 Pink uses a GPS-Scrambled Worker to build a Tunnel Network above Purples second SCUD Storm, and then he drives out a GPS-Scrambled Dragon Tank, and that little Dragon Tank burnt up all of the WMD's in Iraq...the SCUD Storm. Pink finishes building his second SCUD Storm at 46:06, and then at 46:15 Purple uses his Sneak Attack on the bottom-middle of the bottom-right base(As in an Arms Dealers distance away from the Supply Dock); He lets out seven(7) Quad Cannons and three(3) Battle Buses and does a load of damage, killing Yellows Command Center, but not before having mines dropped on top of his buses, stopping him from advancing anywhere. The attack was done away with by 47:23. Purple used his SCUD Storm to destroy Pinks Palace, Arms Dealer, and Supply Center at 47:48. Purple spams loads of Battle Buses and attack with them on the Bottom-Left base, and then uses his Sneak Attack on the Bottom-Right base(just a little to the left of the last Sneak Attack) between 47:00 - 49:59. 50:00 Gold and Pink hang on for dear life and Pink launches a SCUD Storm onto Purples Palace and an Arms Dealer, in an attempt to slow his production of Battle Buses. Gold and Pink are blown to bits by Quad Cannons and Battle Buses until they quit at 52:00. ____ AAR: Units Created/Units Lost/Units Destroyed/Buildings Constructed/Buildings Lost/Buildings Destroyed/Supplies Collected Purple - 462/330/218/105/24/49/393908 Pink - 230/244/198/68/51/12/215513 Gold - 102/93/109/28/21/14/106618 Cyan - 103/104/63/11/2/23/61110 ____ This game would have been significantly different, had it not been for the apparent lag, but I'm sure the game didn't have to take quite as long as it did regardless; Purple could have just spammed hundreds of Quad Cannons and Demo Bikes to win faster. I'll give this a 7/10 because it was a good game, but not one that really had me cheering at the end.
Please correct me on any spelling, or grammar errors that I made.
This post has been edited by Leikeze: May 19 2017, 20:37 PM
Team 1 AI^BrutalArmy^(-DoMiNaToR-) - Purple, GLA Demolitions General(Top Left) HAYABUSA^BG - Cyan, USA Vanilla(Top Right) Team 2 Fo0L`(fgl) - Pink, Stealth(Bottom Right) DaGoS`(bgl) - Gold, China Tank General(Bottom Left) ____ Pink and Gold make a decent 2 vs 2 team(especially as GLA) from what I have seen while playing with then; Purple is an Expert, and Cyan is a 1 vs 1 guy, so the game should be decent no mater what the match-up. No Particularly unique Build Orders are done at the start; Purple does a full-defense of his side of the wall, using three spread tunnels, two on the hill, and one by the unsafe supply, and a demo trap in front of each direct-wall entrance(those pointed toward his base and his unsafe supply). Cyan does a poorly executed drop on Golds base at 1:26, just below, to the right, of the main supply; He loses 2 Missile Defenders to Golds Supply Trucks, most likely due to lag delaying the "X" split. That really benefited Gold, because he delayed taking his safe supply in favor of a quick second War Factory pointed toward Purples unsafe supply; He used that second War Factory to put out a Dragon Tank toward said unsafe supply, and used his first War Factory for a defensive Gatling Tank. The Dragon Tank drives past a Demo Trap and does get a flame-wall onto Purples Unsafe supplies defensive tunnel, which burns up several workers and two RPG Troopers(most likely to lag); While the flaming of the tunnel was ongoing Pink sent a Technical filled with four(4) Terrorists and a Worker up past the Dragon Tank and into the Demo Trap at 1:55; Why that was going on Cyan failed with another Missile Defender drop. Between 2:30 and 2:40 Purple and Pink kill off each others unsafe supply workers. At 3:10 Yellow flame walls Purples unsafe supply again, killing all of the workers. At 3:33 Purple failed an attempt to run over all of the workers at Pinks unsafe supply. Pink went for an early Palace, and it is completed at 3:47, and Gold started on his Propaganda Center at 3:40; So Team 2 was Tech'd up, and on superior supply income(between the two of them) than their opponents. Pink and Gold were most likely doing more communicating than Purple and Cyan. At 3:56 Pink ran over all of Purple workers at his unsafe supply(just needed at least one Humvee to stop that); Cyan reacts after Purple drops a Beacon on his unsafe supply. At 4:39 Cyan moves his army of four(4) Humvees and an Ambulance through the wall toward Pinks Unsafe supply; He destroys a Tunnel Network and a Gatling Tank($1,500), but loses two full Humvees and three(3) Scout Drones($4,700). At 5:34 Pink successfully destroyed Purples unsafe supply with a full-Terror-tech. At 6:00 Gold engages the Tunnel and it's army at Purples unsafe supply, and Cyan is planning a three(3) Chinook drop on Gold. At 6:25 Purple and Cyan both go in for the attack on Golds base while his army is destroying Purples unsafe supply; Cyan with his drop(in the same spot as his very first drop) of five(5) Humvees with an Ambulance, and Purple with what army he could muster. Cyan and Purple totally destroy Golds base, and Pink was unable to help due to his choice to go full-Rocket Buggies; Yellow goes up toward Purples main base with his untouched army. Cyan destroyed the top layer of Pinks main-supply with a Tier 2 A-10 strike(Would have destroyed it all, but a few rockets were stopped by the camouflaged Palace). At 8:30 Gold destroys the Strategy Center of Cyan's that was beside Purples main-supply, rendering all of his Humvees very weak in the lag. At 9:00 Cyan comes to help Purple with a few Humvees, but Pink also comes up from the bottom with three(3) Rocket Buggies to help Yellow. By 9:26 Golds army is destroyed, along with Cyan's, but Purple is left with no income and only $604; Pinks Rocket Buggies hit a Demo trap and that was that. Gold is promoted and goes for his Command Center at 9:30. Cyan gets his Strategy Center and S&D back up at 9:54, and Pink Beacons it for Gold. 10:00 $23,925 in Team 1's unsafe Supply Dock. At 10:20 Purple and Cyan both go full-force against Pinks defenses(Three(3) Tunnel Networks) using nine(9) Scorpion Tanks, four(4) Humvees, and two(2) Ambulances; They are 100% Successful in destroying Pinks defenses and getting into the area of his base. At 11:05 Gold destroys Cyan's Strategy Center using his Tier 3 Artillery Strike. Purple and Cyan are deterred from attacking Pinks base by an Emperor Overlord and Jarmen Kell, and go after the safe-supply instead. In the meantime Purple tries to take back his unsafe supply, but Pink has the same plans to take it, and establishes a Tunnel Network just a few feet to the left of it, while Purple builds a supply to the right of it. At 11:54 Cyan using a Tier 3 A-10 Strike to destroy Pinks main-supply and his Arms Dealer; And He and Purple move into Golds base from the safe-supply area. At 12:20 Cyan destroys the Tunnel Network Pink build by Purples unsafe-supply. At 12:57 the destruction of Golds base is total, no building remains; And at the same time Cyan dropped a Fuel-Air Bomb and Used his Spectre Gunship on Pinks base; Destroying Golds War Factory with the Bomb and Pinks Black Market with the Spectre. At 14:02 both Teams are in defense, except for Golds Lotus, who waits until 14:45 to force Cyan into selling his War Factory; By this time all of the players are on nearly no income, or funds to use, Cyan has none. Cyan uses his army of six(6) Humvees and three(3) Ambulances to attack Pinks Unsafe-supply area; He is only somewhat successful, and is forced to retreat when an Emperor Overlord and Jarmen Kell come over. At 6:12 Cyan loses his Strategy Center to another Artillery Strike, and he only has $1,910 left, so he cannot rebuild it. At 16:24 Purple finally finishes his Palace that he started a while before, but at the same time he loses his unsafe supply to a Terror-tech sent by Pink, leaving him with only $2,012, so not enough for a real Black Market. At 16:54 Cyan destroys one of Pinks two(2) Black Markets using his Tier 3 A-10 Strike. Purple goes the FAKE Black Market path(always a good choice in the situation). At 17:004 Purple places a Beacon on his unsafe supply to let Cyan know that he is stealing his funds, and at the same time Cyan sends his Humvee army into Golds base-area again, destroying the Supply Center there; At the same time he used his Spectre Gunship on Pinks other Black Market, destroying it, but missing the camouflaged one just below it. At 17:46 that Emperor Overlord(Gold) and Jarmen Kell(Pink) destroy Purples unsafe supply. At 18:24 Cyan destroys Pinks unsafe supply. At around 19:30 that nasty Emperor Overlord and Jarmen Kell combo was finally ended, but Purples Jarmen Kell. At 19:46 Gold managed to get a Dragon Tank into Cyan's base and burn away his barracks; And at 19:57 Cyan leaves, giving Purple USA, and Power, but not many funds. 20:00 At 20:20 the Dragon Tank is destroyed, but not until it destroys a Power-plant(CFR) and makes Purple sell the USA Command Center(that could have just been for the $1,000, but a free large scan is very helpful). With Power in his hands and near-complete map control, Purple dominates the field. At 22:07 Purple goes for his Command Center, and is actively attacking the safe-supply area on his way into Pinks base. Gold uses his Tier 3 Artillery Strike on Purples attacking army, but only destroys a single Quad Cannon(Would have been better used on Purples income). Purple launches a few attacks on what remains of the combined defenses of Pink and Gold(Both corners in the bottom-right base). At 26:00 Pink tries to get a Tunnel Network behind Purples unsafe supply, but Purple is sick of having Michael Bay movies being shot in that area, so he kills the worker. At 26:40 Gold displays his Iron Will, with four tier 1 hackers in a lagging game, he still has it in him to use a Dragon Tank to destroy a Tunnel Network Purple built at the safe-supply by their base. At 29:11 Gold almost dropped a load of mines on top of Purples Jarmen Kell, and Pink uses an Ambush as well, coupled with a Radar Van, but Jarmen just snipes out the Radar Van and walks away from the Rebels. 30:00 Purple is sitting pretty on eight(8) Black Markets and Power. At 30:26 Gold destroys Purples power and a single Black Market with his Artillery Strike. Pink drives two Battle Buses around looking to destroy whatever Purple has in the bottom-left base. Generals Abilities become the preferred mode for attacking. 40:00 The game really slows down and becomes campy, with only little bits of action here and there. At around 42:38 Purple finishes his first SCUD Storm, and has switched over to Battle Buses, but Pink drops a Toxin Bomb on his production. At 42:58 Pink finished a Tunnel Network behind Purples defenses, just a few inches away from the top-right supply. At 43:04 the second SCUD Storm is up for Purple. At 43:50 Pink hijacks one of Purples Dozers in that top-right base, he gets a Power-plant scaffold in his base, and then Purple retaliates against the tunnels behind his defenses, but doesn't manage to kill both the tunnels on the first attempt; He does that at 44:59. Pink gets his first SCUD Storm up at around 44:46. At 45:15 Pink uses a GPS-Scrambled Worker to build a Tunnel Network above Purples second SCUD Storm, and then he drives out a GPS-Scrambled Dragon Tank, and that little Dragon Tank burnt up all of the WMD's in Iraq...the SCUD Storm. Pink finishes building his second SCUD Storm at 46:06, and then at 46:15 Purple uses his Sneak Attack on the bottom-middle of the bottom-right base(As in an Arms Dealers distance away from the Supply Dock); He lets out seven(7) Quad Cannons and three(3) Battle Buses and does a load of damage, killing Yellows Command Center, but not before having mines dropped on top of his buses, stopping him from advancing anywhere. The attack was done away with by 47:23. Purple used his SCUD Storm to destroy Pinks Palace, Arms Dealer, and Supply Center at 47:48. Purple spams loads of Battle Buses and attack with them on the Bottom-Left base, and then uses his Sneak Attack on the Bottom-Right base(just a little to the left of the last Sneak Attack) between 47:00 - 49:59. 50:00 Gold and Pink hang on for dear life and Pink launches a SCUD Storm onto Purples Palace and an Arms Dealer, in an attempt to slow his production of Battle Buses. Gold and Pink are blown to bits by Quad Cannons and Battle Buses until they quit at 52:00. ____ AAR: Units Created/Units Lost/Units Destroyed/Buildings Constructed/Buildings Lost/Buildings Destroyed/Supplies Collected Purple - 462/330/218/105/24/49/393908 Pink - 230/244/198/68/51/12/215513 Gold - 102/93/109/28/21/14/106618 Cyan - 103/104/63/11/2/23/61110 ____ This game would have been significantly different, had it not been for the apparent lag, but I'm sure the game didn't have to take quite as long as it did regardless; Purple could have just spammed hundreds of Quad Cannons and Demo Bikes to win faster. I'll give this a 7/10 because it was a good game, but not one that really had me cheering at the end.
Please correct me on any spelling, or grammar errors that I made.
Team 1 AI^BrutalArmy^(-DoMiNaToR-) - Purple, GLA Demolitions General(Top Left) HAYABUSA^BG - Cyan, USA Vanilla(Top Right) Team 2 Fo0L`(fgl) - Pink, Stealth(Bottom Right) DaGoS`(bgl) - Gold, China Tank General(Bottom Left) ____ Pink and Gold make a decent 2 vs 2 team(especially as GLA) from what I have seen while playing with then; Purple is an Expert, and Cyan is a 1 vs 1 guy, so the game should be decent no mater what the match-up. No Particularly unique Build Orders are done at the start; Purple does a full-defense of his side of the wall, using three spread tunnels, two on the hill, and one by the unsafe supply, and a demo trap in front of each direct-wall entrance(those pointed toward his base and his unsafe supply). Cyan does a poorly executed drop on Golds base at 1:26, just below, to the right, of the main supply; He loses 2 Missile Defenders to Golds Supply Trucks, most likely due to lag delaying the "X" split. That really benefited Gold, because he delayed taking his safe supply in favor of a quick second War Factory pointed toward Purples unsafe supply; He used that second War Factory to put out a Dragon Tank toward said unsafe supply, and used his first War Factory for a defensive Gatling Tank. The Dragon Tank drives past a Demo Trap and does get a flame-wall onto Purples Unsafe supplies defensive tunnel, which burns up several workers and two RPG Troopers(most likely to lag); While the flaming of the tunnel was ongoing Pink sent a Technical filled with four(4) Terrorists and a Worker up past the Dragon Tank and into the Demo Trap at 1:55; Why that was going on Cyan failed with another Missile Defender drop. Between 2:30 and 2:40 Purple and Pink kill off each others unsafe supply workers. At 3:10 Yellow flame walls Purples unsafe supply again, killing all of the workers. At 3:33 Purple failed an attempt to run over all of the workers at Pinks unsafe supply. Pink went for an early Palace, and it is completed at 3:47, and Gold started on his Propaganda Center at 3:40; So Team 2 was Tech'd up, and on superior supply income(between the two of them) than their opponents. Pink and Gold were most likely doing more communicating than Purple and Cyan. At 3:56 Pink ran over all of Purple workers at his unsafe supply(just needed at least one Humvee to stop that); Cyan reacts after Purple drops a Beacon on his unsafe supply. At 4:39 Cyan moves his army of four(4) Humvees and an Ambulance through the wall toward Pinks Unsafe supply; He destroys a Tunnel Network and a Gatling Tank($1,500), but loses two full Humvees and three(3) Scout Drones($4,700). At 5:34 Pink successfully destroyed Purples unsafe supply with a full-Terror-tech. At 6:00 Gold engages the Tunnel and it's army at Purples unsafe supply, and Cyan is planning a three(3) Chinook drop on Gold. At 6:25 Purple and Cyan both go in for the attack on Golds base while his army is destroying Purples unsafe supply; Cyan with his drop(in the same spot as his very first drop) of five(5) Humvees with an Ambulance, and Purple with what army he could muster. Cyan and Purple totally destroy Golds base, and Pink was unable to help due to his choice to go full-Rocket Buggies; Yellow goes up toward Purples main base with his untouched army. Cyan destroyed the top layer of Pinks main-supply with a Tier 2 A-10 strike(Would have destroyed it all, but a few rockets were stopped by the camouflaged Palace). At 8:30 Gold destroys the Strategy Center of Cyan's that was beside Purples main-supply, rendering all of his Humvees very weak in the lag. At 9:00 Cyan comes to help Purple with a few Humvees, but Pink also comes up from the bottom with three(3) Rocket Buggies to help Yellow. By 9:26 Golds army is destroyed, along with Cyan's, but Purple is left with no income and only $604; Pinks Rocket Buggies hit a Demo trap and that was that. Gold is promoted and goes for his Command Center at 9:30. Cyan gets his Strategy Center and S&D back up at 9:54, and Pink Beacons it for Gold. 10:00 $23,925 in Team 1's unsafe Supply Dock. At 10:20 Purple and Cyan both go full-force against Pinks defenses(Three(3) Tunnel Networks) using nine(9) Scorpion Tanks, four(4) Humvees, and two(2) Ambulances; They are 100% Successful in destroying Pinks defenses and getting into the area of his base. At 11:05 Gold destroys Cyan's Strategy Center using his Tier 3 Artillery Strike. Purple and Cyan are deterred from attacking Pinks base by an Emperor Overlord and Jarmen Kell, and go after the safe-supply instead. In the meantime Purple tries to take back his unsafe supply, but Pink has the same plans to take it, and establishes a Tunnel Network just a few feet to the left of it, while Purple builds a supply to the right of it. At 11:54 Cyan using a Tier 3 A-10 Strike to destroy Pinks main-supply and his Arms Dealer; And He and Purple move into Golds base from the safe-supply area. At 12:20 Cyan destroys the Tunnel Network Pink build by Purples unsafe-supply. At 12:57 the destruction of Golds base is total, no building remains; And at the same time Cyan dropped a Fuel-Air Bomb and Used his Spectre Gunship on Pinks base; Destroying Golds War Factory with the Bomb and Pinks Black Market with the Spectre. At 14:02 both Teams are in defense, except for Golds Lotus, who waits until 14:45 to force Cyan into selling his War Factory; By this time all of the players are on nearly no income, or funds to use, Cyan has none. Cyan uses his army of six(6) Humvees and three(3) Ambulances to attack Pinks Unsafe-supply area; He is only somewhat successful, and is forced to retreat when an Emperor Overlord and Jarmen Kell come over. At 6:12 Cyan loses his Strategy Center to another Artillery Strike, and he only has $1,910 left, so he cannot rebuild it. At 16:24 Purple finally finishes his Palace that he started a while before, but at the same time he loses his unsafe supply to a Terror-tech sent by Pink, leaving him with only $2,012, so not enough for a real Black Market. At 16:54 Cyan destroys one of Pinks two(2) Black Markets using his Tier 3 A-10 Strike. Purple goes the FAKE Black Market path(always a good choice in the situation). At 17:004 Purple places a Beacon on his unsafe supply to let Cyan know that he is stealing his funds, and at the same time Cyan sends his Humvee army into Golds base-area again, destroying the Supply Center there; At the same time he used his Spectre Gunship on Pinks other Black Market, destroying it, but missing the camouflaged one just below it. At 17:46 that Emperor Overlord(Gold) and Jarmen Kell(Pink) destroy Purples unsafe supply. At 18:24 Cyan destroys Pinks unsafe supply. At around 19:30 that nasty Emperor Overlord and Jarmen Kell combo was finally ended, but Purples Jarmen Kell. At 19:46 Gold managed to get a Dragon Tank into Cyan's base and burn away his barracks; And at 19:57 Cyan leaves, giving Purple USA, and Power, but not many funds. 20:00 At 20:20 the Dragon Tank is destroyed, but not until it destroys a Power-plant(CFR) and makes Purple sell the USA Command Center(that could have just been for the $1,000, but a free large scan is very helpful). With Power in his hands and near-complete map control, Purple dominates the field. At 22:07 Purple goes for his Command Center, and is actively attacking the safe-supply area on his way into Pinks base. Gold uses his Tier 3 Artillery Strike on Purples attacking army, but only destroys a single Quad Cannon(Would have been better used on Purples income). Purple launches a few attacks on what remains of the combined defenses of Pink and Gold(Both corners in the bottom-right base). At 26:00 Pink tries to get a Tunnel Network behind Purples unsafe supply, but Purple is sick of having Michael Bay movies being shot in that area, so he kills the worker. At 26:40 Gold displays his Iron Will, with four tier 1 hackers in a lagging game, he still has it in him to use a Dragon Tank to destroy a Tunnel Network Purple built at the safe-supply by their base. At 29:11 Gold almost dropped a load of mines on top of Purples Jarmen Kell, and Pink uses an Ambush as well, coupled with a Radar Van, but Jarmen just snipes out the Radar Van and walks away from the Rebels. 30:00 Purple is sitting pretty on eight(8) Black Markets and Power. At 30:26 Gold destroys Purples power and a single Black Market with his Artillery Strike. Pink drives two Battle Buses around looking to destroy whatever Purple has in the bottom-left base. Generals Abilities become the preferred mode for attacking. 40:00 The game really slows down and becomes campy, with only little bits of action here and there. At around 42:38 Purple finishes his first SCUD Storm, and has switched over to Battle Buses, but Pink drops a Toxin Bomb on his production. At 42:58 Pink finished a Tunnel Network behind Purples defenses, just a few inches away from the top-right supply. At 43:04 the second SCUD Storm is up for Purple. At 43:50 Pink hijacks one of Purples Dozers in that top-right base, he gets a Power-plant scaffold in his base, and then Purple retaliates against the tunnels behind his defenses, but doesn't manage to kill both the tunnels on the first attempt; He does that at 44:59. Pink gets his first SCUD Storm up at around 44:46. At 45:15 Pink uses a GPS-Scrambled Worker to build a Tunnel Network above Purples second SCUD Storm, and then he drives out a GPS-Scrambled Dragon Tank, and that little Dragon Tank burnt up all of the WMD's in Iraq...the SCUD Storm. Pink finishes building his second SCUD Storm at 46:06, and then at 46:15 Purple uses his Sneak Attack on the bottom-middle of the bottom-right base(As in an Arms Dealers distance away from the Supply Dock); He lets out seven(7) Quad Cannons and three(3) Battle Buses and does a load of damage, killing Yellows Command Center, but not before having mines dropped on top of his buses, stopping him from advancing anywhere. The attack was done away with by 47:23. Purple used his SCUD Storm to destroy Pinks Palace, Arms Dealer, and Supply Center at 47:48. Purple spams loads of Battle Buses and attack with them on the Bottom-Left base, and then uses his Sneak Attack on the Bottom-Right base(just a little to the left of the last Sneak Attack) between 47:00 - 49:59. 50:00 Gold and Pink hang on for dear life and Pink launches a SCUD Storm onto Purples Palace and an Arms Dealer, in an attempt to slow his production of Battle Buses. Gold and Pink are blown to bits by Quad Cannons and Battle Buses until they quit at 52:00. ____ AAR: Units Created/Units Lost/Units Destroyed/Buildings Constructed/Buildings Lost/Buildings Destroyed/Supplies Collected Purple - 462/330/218/105/24/49/393908 Pink - 230/244/198/68/51/12/215513 Gold - 102/93/109/28/21/14/106618 Cyan - 103/104/63/11/2/23/61110 ____ This game would have been significantly different, had it not been for the apparent lag, but I'm sure the game didn't have to take quite as long as it did regardless; Purple could have just spammed hundreds of Quad Cannons and Demo Bikes to win faster. I'll give this a 7/10 because it was a good game, but not one that really had me cheering at the end.
Please correct me on any spelling, or grammar errors that I made.
your wall of text is more like a narration of what happened in the match. let's say you want to follow sc2 pro scene; what would you prefer more, an audiobook that narrates the matches or a stream/upload that you can watch? instead of popping up zh to watch this replay, why would they read your 'audiobook'?
reviews are always subjective. what is important is to get your opinion out there, make the review look like you, not like a lifeless objective narration of the match events. what did you think were good points in this replay? bad points? strategies (or lack of thereof)? what players could've done differently? what were the highlights and so on. your reviews are 90% objective and 10% subjective, where your opinions are only after the narration and random bits spread here and there. it should be the complete opposite.
points above are to give you an idea what a good review would include, not a concrete rule of what a review should be like. you should also consider why you are writing the reviews; if you're doing this just to get a staff badge, then fine. your current reviews should be sufficient. on the other hand if you're doing this to contribute, you should ask yourself who are you writing these reviews for? what benefit can they get from reading these? at the very least you're not giving any pointers on how the players could improve. mind you, reviews are a SUBJECTIVE thing, and opinions can't be wrong (or so they say), so even if you're not a player with top skill and top knowledge of the game, you can still go ahead and give pointers you see fitting.
lastly... too long. cut off the useless fluff, make that rough diamond a bit more polished. keep it to the point; while the review doesn't necessarily have to be short, seeing a wall of text like this just transforms it into a black and white tattoo on my screen and i skip it.
again, a+ for the effort. d or barely c for the actual review though. if you want to make good reviews, you need to make drastic changes to your review style.
Raven is right. I stopped reading after 6 sentences. Whats the point in saying what exactly happened at the 2 min mark? Read reviews from former well-known guys. I know you put much effort into this but a review doesnt look like this. I always appreciated the structure into pros, cons, tips to improve and a short essay at the beginning about the game. You do have the game knowledge for this, I think. If you are unsure then you can ask your brother. He should be able to help you out with tips and cons.
This post has been edited by -SeX`iie: May 21 2017, 17:52 PM
You want a salary for this? 
A bit laggy so hard to micro.
1.6mb game.