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BlackHorseCav - SorYu

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# 21-SorYu Mar 10 2011, 00:02 AM
Any comments, advices ?

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# 22-SorYu Apr 4 2011, 22:58 PM
I know this program is coming to its end and I wasn't especially active, but since my mentor haven't posted in over a month I ask whether it's possible that any of you supported me a little bit here ?
I would much appreciate it as I wanna learn sth new.

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# 23trve^viking Apr 7 2011, 03:10 AM
hey, just saw that and i think ill jump in, BHC is busy atm tongue.gif

do u have msn and teamviewer? and which ps version u use?

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# 24-SorYu Apr 7 2011, 11:22 AM
Yes I have, version is CS 5. Thx for attention.


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# 25trve^viking Apr 7 2011, 21:00 PM
added smile.gif just write me when u see me on, iam most online at evenings in the week, i have german timezone, gmt + 1 or 2.

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# 26-SorYu Apr 7 2011, 21:28 PM
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Check this out. Comments pls tongue.gif

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# 27-SorYu Apr 9 2011, 12:34 PM
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Another try.

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# 28trve^viking Apr 9 2011, 15:10 PM
its better from the focal point and flow, but like i said in msn, u have too many differend colors, here the render we work with smile.gif

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# 29-SorYu Apr 10 2011, 01:02 AM
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# 30trve^viking Apr 10 2011, 17:09 PM
rly a few steps better than the last sig, the light source is on the right place, focal point is not bad.
the render is a bit oversharpend, u see the borders of the hair? should look more smooth, also the font dont rly match imo. ur on a good way smile.gif

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# 31-SorYu Apr 11 2011, 00:24 AM
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# 32trve^viking Apr 11 2011, 02:37 AM
like i told u in msn, its not a that bad sig and u get rly better, but i would work on the oversharpend effects/colors of it, and make it more =.
also text can be better, we will work on that next tv session smile.gif , i also will post something i made out of the psd u send me.

heres the anime sig from the render before.
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# 33-SorYu Apr 11 2011, 13:03 PM
Sweet ! biggrin.gif
I can never do proper depth, let alone light elements in c4ds ^^

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# 34trve^viking Apr 13 2011, 22:56 PM
its all a practice thing, depends always on the render and the theme what bg is good, u can build urself 1 with renders or take parts of walpapers or stocks.

heres the sig from ur psd, i did not that much to it,just removed a few things and put a gradient map on it, the colors are more "smooth" now imo and the focal point is clear.

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# 35trve^viking Apr 13 2011, 23:53 PM
here is the psd smile.gif
http://www.mediafire.com/?g80h75k1rekh6fx

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# 36-SorYu Apr 14 2011, 17:11 PM
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How about this one ?

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# 37trve^viking Apr 14 2011, 21:11 PM
i would put the lightsource more to the left,maybe behind the border, cause atm it dont looks like that she looks on it.
also on these anime sigs i would try to build the scene better, cause the face of the figures are boring compared to human faces, well ofc not if its a known character out of dbz or naruto or so tongue.gif
but try to show the upper body in the sig or make the head smaller.

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# 38-SorYu Apr 19 2011, 14:48 PM
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# 39-SorYu Apr 19 2011, 15:04 PM
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I think I'll use it as sig.

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# 40trve^viking Apr 19 2011, 20:12 PM
thats cool, i like the first version, colors are not bad + the text fits good smile.gif u used the layer mask to erase the part of her head?

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