I agree with everythin stated in the review but I'd to add couple things to TraumA's gameplay.
WNxTraumA - One of the things which may have slowed you down a bit was that you accidentally (I think so) built combinations of mass storages and pgens. - I personally think that it's better to do one thing at a time when building your base. I mean that somewhere around 10 minutes you were assisting T2 LF, Upgrading your AF and building a T2 pgen. This used all of your energy and there was a short stall. I think that a better choice would have been to pause the AF upgrading and use idle engineers to assist the building of the T2 pg.
Korben_Dallas - Apart from the initial BO I would say that you should've been much more aggressive. Usually when you're getting overrun by your enemy it's a good thing to give him something else to think. Just sending 2 mantisses for each of TraumA's north-west mexes would've been great way to buy more time.